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Where I failed you...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:31:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The first day I ever met you
I knew then that you meant more than any other
I saw something in you that made me seeing life differently…
I was at a low point in my life
Sad…
Depressed…
Lonely and aching for a soul mate…
Then you came along
And came into my life
You helped me up off the ground
You brushed off my back
And you told me “never give up, we’ll do it together”
We faced a major obstacle then…
One that cost us some friendships
One that caused some grief…
But out of this obstacle a love and bond was formed
The love and bond between you and me
I had never known anyone like you
I had never had anyone take time to get to know me
I had never had anyone care for me like you do
And I realized that you were the one I wanted to spend my life with
To make a home for the two of us
And to raise a family together hand in hand
And we started building that dream…
And in the hustle of everyday life
I focused on where I was headed
And where my job was going with the hope of becoming more…
I wanted to earn good money and make your life incredible…
I wanted to be the one you came to when you needed something fixed
And as I focused so hard on everything going on around me
And tried to keep these goals in sight
I lost focus of the most important goal
I lost focus of the one thing I was doing any of it for
I lost focus of you…
To make you happy everyday…
I can’t believe that for even one moment of my life
I could ever take your love for granted
But I see that I did…
And for that I am truly, truly sorry...
You add so much to everything I’ve ever done
You have helped me through trying times
The way that you’ve supported me
And been my strength when I was weak
I never would have made it this far in life
Without your guidance and love...
And now its gone...
I never dreamed I’d lose you
I never meant to make you cry
I never wanted to fail you
I never wanted to say good bye...
***I'm so sorry I failed you...***
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Re: Where I failed you...
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by MyNameIsJonas on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:36:55 PM AEST
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| Weee~ sad poetry that I can relate to. I think |
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Re: Where I failed you...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:39:24 PM AEST
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| Sorry for your lost of your true love. Hope that it works out for the both of yall. Wonderful write; Very sad and can feel the emotions that you have put into this. Great A++++ |
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Re: Where I failed you...
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:25:42 PM AEST
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awww sorry to hear your lost.
so sad |
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Re: Where I failed you...
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by wikedladi on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:34:45 AM AEST
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| NIce write kiddo! No one means to fail anyone... It's just a matter of finding your focus again. great love is hard to find. Don't be scared to try this one again. you've got friends behind you! we loe you both alot! |
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Re: Where I failed you...
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by DarkFaerie on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 05:03:21 PM AEST
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| Breathtaking write, it brings tears to my eyes. |
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Re: Where I failed you...
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by brew on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:23:12 PM AEST
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Wow.Chris that is written with such deep emotion. Ok, so you beleived you failed them? Go find them, and keep making what you started, and know you can make happiness. Beautiful write, hope they apperciate how you did and still feel.
Brew~ |
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Re: Where I failed you...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 02:03:35 PM AEST
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A beautiful outpouring of emotions..
You have never really failed UNTIL YOU GIVE UP!! Think on this!!
Jenni |
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