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all alone
Contributed by
weeme
on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:51:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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All alone
Sitting here alone today
Wondering if ill find my way
To the top is were I must go
Before I fall way down below
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For if I fall way down below
I won’t have any place to go
So to talk to you is like a plea
While this pain builds up inside of me
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For everything that I have felt
And every card that has been dealt
I need you now than ever more
Before it turns to blood and gore
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So help me please I beg of thee
To take me out this misery
Before it turns out to be…..
Some place I …..
Would rather not be
Copyright ©
weeme
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2006-03-12 16:51:17]
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Re: all alone
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by Nothingness on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:04:33 PM AEST
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| wow thats powerful i can feel youur pain and you are not alone i really hope things look up for you soon |
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Re: all alone
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:19:29 PM AEST
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wow, really great write, emotional and heartfelt, i hope it all works out for you.
~natalya |
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Re: all alone
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by Alison on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 10:47:14 PM AEST
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| there is very strong feeling in this poem! awesome |
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