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I am with you...
Contributed by
bethwood
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:27:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am with you when you're feeling sad
When the tears roll down your cheek
When all you feel is emptiness
So tired,drained and weak.
I am with you when you're feeling hurt
When the pain aches in your heart
When the memories replay themselves
Of before you had to part.
I am with you when you're feeling lost
When you need a hand to guide
When every step takes you away
From the shell in which you hide.
I am with you when you're feeling scared
When the smallest things you fear
When you need me,please,just let me know
Because for you I'm always here.
Beth Wood.
March '06
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bethwood
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Re: I am with you...
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by twick on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:17:26 PM AEST
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| I liked this. It seems very personal and touching. It is obvious it comes from your heart. Good job. I hope it touches your mom as well. |
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Re: I am with you...
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:22:04 PM AEST
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a very heart-felt poem, touching, i'm sure your mom will love it.
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Re: I am with you...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:18:38 PM AEST
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| I'll bet this sucker brought tears to your mom's eyes. And strength. I've just finished reading all of this young woman's poems (I can call her that 'cause I'm 57) and every one was full of love for her mom and dad, her husband, and undoubtedly among the main loves of her life, her twin boys. Check 'em all out - it's a fun journey in love. |
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Re: I am with you...
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by bethwood on
Monday, 3rd April 2006 @ 12:20:28 PM AEST
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| thankyou for taking the time to wade throught them all!! its very complimentary to know that you have taken the time to read them! thankyou so much and that you have all enjoyed them makes the effort so much more worth it! |
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Re: I am with you...
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by AllenSmyth on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 06:03:23 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem, and I don't say that often. It shows how lovely and strong your soul is, given that you are grieving too. Amazing. I bet your mum loved it.
From Julianne
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