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Cruelty
Contributed by
pisces101
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:12:43 PM in AEST
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You’re so cruel
You’re as cruel as the morning sun
Waking me from just getting to sleep
the sleep that thoughts of you deprive me of
You don't desire happiness for me
Only happiness with you is suitable
You’re so cruel
You’re as cruel as the bottle of liquor
That stays by the foot of my bed
Taunting me because you’ve left
And my silly mind can’t rest
Only tears love me
You’re so cruel
As cruel as the day I saw you
She tempted me with your demeanor
But failed to let me know
You were a devil in disguise
But only for me
You’re so cruel
As cruel as every love song
That I used to care for
That sings to me and you with sadness in its voice
Why you want to let those songs down?
They sang for us.
You’re so cruel
As cruel as all of the dances
The dances that drug me down to my knees
And I begged you for forgiveness
But you never forgave me
You never forgave me
You’re so cruel Ghassan
You’re as cruel as every time you said you love me
The times I had to say it first
And the times you wouldn’t make love to me
As cruel as the love I have for you
She wants to break my heart
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Re: Cruelty
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:27:46 PM AEST
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wow... that poem literally hurt. Your anger...pain, so apparant in it... great write, heart-felt, and good luck getting over it.
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Re: Cruelty
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by AllenSmyth on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 05:59:41 PM AEST
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Very intense and appeals to the senses. Speaks very much of hurt and betrayal. Well done - Julianne
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