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Without Enough
Contributed by
felicitous
on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:11:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Would that my smile
Had been enough
To intensify
Would that my eyes
Had been enough
To clarify
Would that my fingers
Had been enough
To electrify
Would that my voice
Had been enough
To gratify
Would that my lips
Had been enough
To satisfy
Would that my love
Had been enough
To rectify
Would that my soul
Had been enough
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2006-03-12 07:11:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Without Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:06:31 AM AEST (User
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I really like this poem.I like that it is sharp and to the point.
cheers,
-glass |
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Re: Without Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by ElevenToedSloth on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:06:01 AM AEST (User
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I usually detest simple poems.
But, this one has won me over.
I really love it.
It's perfect. |
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Re: Without Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by Drapes on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:11:37 PM AEST (User
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Ooo very good! I like!
-Drapes |
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Re: Without Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nothingness on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:05:42 PM AEST (User
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very nice its really well written keep it up |
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Re: Without Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by thesinner on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:47:48 PM AEST (User
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Fantasic.Loved it .It says it all. Great write! |
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Re: Without Enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by guiltycircles on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 12:23:02 AM AEST (User
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this was incredible...the questioning of wondering, the thoughts about why...well done |
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