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EVERY THING ABOUT YOU
Contributed by
tears_of_blood
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:46:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You smile and I laugh
You cry and I die
You run but never to fast for me
You hide but were I can find you
You kiss me with so much love
Me to you with just as much
You hold my hand and stand with me as a proud girlfriend
You sleep with me like it was meant to be
You talk to me like I was there
You never let me down or let me be scared
You give me all a boy can ask
You gave me the world now it’s my turn to give you it back
So you can see how it feels to be me
Not to be scared of what maybe
Show you a please where nothing can go wrong
To show you the world you belong in
For all this iam in love with you for
Love is a small word with a big emotion
That’s what I give to you love that well never end.
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Re: EVERY THING ABOUT YOU
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:32:43 AM AEST
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| i will always have faith and i hope that you will always remember that despite the rollercoaster of changes that we ride...you'll always be mine. The poem is beautiful...you should post that new one you sent me. |
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Re: EVERY THING ABOUT YOU
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:52:55 AM AEST
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| That was a real nice, heartfelt poem...being in love is great...enjoy it while you have it! Tanya |
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Re: EVERY THING ABOUT YOU
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:19:54 PM AEST
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Awww, so sweet! Your girl is so lucky to have someone like you!
I really liked the beginning...
"You smile and I laugh
You cry and I die"
Nice job!
-Drapes |
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Re: EVERY THING ABOUT YOU
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by thesinner on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:56:26 PM AEST
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| So touching and sweet.Well done |
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