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Why did you leave me
Contributed by
diablohate
on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:07:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You left me all alone
To be stared at
By sinful eyes
And greedy desires
Why did you leave me
On that piece of wood
That my life will end
So others can begen
You turned your back
When I screamed for help
And cried out your name
But you couldn't care
I died for your creations
The ones that are perfect
And have no flaws
But you turned on me
I suffered hell
Through many days
and loney nights
But where were you
Why did you leave me
I ask himself
As I walk a lonely path
To my death
Nailed me up
And cused me out
Speared my side
All for you
........why did you leave me.......
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diablohate
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2006-03-12 04:07:43]
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Re: Why did you leave me
(User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:23:55 PM AEST
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Powerful write.
You turned your back
When I screamed for help
And cried out your name
But you couldn't care
Wow, its like you are speaking directly to me. Fantastic job. : ) |
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Re: Why did you leave me
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:50:22 PM AEST
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ouch...painful poem, and you expressed it really well. great write.
~natalya |
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