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Sky flying
Contributed by
DreamPoetess
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:42:18 AM in AEST
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Busy sky alright
I kept bumping into stars,
Not an easy night.
That mean moon bit me
Illuminated my end,
I glowed back alright.
I jumped a rainbow
Hues electrocuted me,
Weird how things happen.
No more sky flying
Will keep my feet on the ground,
My promise for sure.
Meagan
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Re: Sky flying
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 01:58:16 PM AEST
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:) this is a simple, light hearted, short & sweet poem. i love it!!!!
truly amazing
- Beth - |
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Re: Sky flying
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:20:23 PM AEST
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Silly? nahhhhh, funny yes put a smile on my face, trust me that's not easy 2 do lol. and the in between the lines wisdom is very effective.
lovely write my friend.
((((Meg))))
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Re: Sky flying
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 05:51:02 AM AEST
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Very cute, awesome write.
Very comical.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Sky flying
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by candysears on
Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 09:07:43 AM AEST
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Brilliant write...Sweet but awesome!!
I have to explore more of your work.
God Bless! |
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Re: Sky flying
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 11:53:08 AM AEST
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Meagan, this is really a fun and whimsical poem. Don't keep your feet on the ground! Keep jumping those rainbows!
Your friend,
Butch |
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Re: Sky flying
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by JimKoz on
Tuesday, 10th December 2013 @ 03:36:19 PM AEST
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| Flying upon the sky seems a lot more exciting than being grounded. |
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