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Broken
Contributed by
o7neves
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Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:06:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Never knew I’d feel like this
That there’d come a day I’d be so ******
At someone whom I’ve so much adored
At someone whom my heart I’ve poured
I thought I’ve done, my last bit of crying
When in fact my tears, are still not drying
Pain is love and love is pain
I’m on the brink of being insane
This can’t be good, that much I know
No matter how hard, I try not to let it show
But it’s so hard, when I love you so much
And miss the way I feel, with your every touch
Copyright ©
o7neves
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2006-03-12 03:06:39]
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Re: Broken
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by wikedladi on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:36:53 AM AEST
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| Great write! im sorry you have to have these feelings.... hope things get better! |
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Re: Broken
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by tears_of_blood on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:04:06 AM AEST
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strong poem if you asked my girlfriend she would say she was once feeling the same as you hurt is something we all have but some give it to others alot more then most i hope every thing works out for you as it did for me good write.
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Re: Broken
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by Nothingness on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:16:39 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write, you are not alone in your pain i really hope things mend themselves fast for you |
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Re: Broken
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by CurtisC on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 11:09:00 PM AEST
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oh tanya :( what happened? this poem is filled with sadness and grief, but nonetheless a great piece of work....glad to see you writing again dear, keep in touch...
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