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Waiting for it to end
Contributed by
DarkFaerie
on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:45:08 AM in AEST
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Slipping from light
Im lost in its grasp
Bashing my hopes
Losing my sanity
Taking me further
I lose control
Floating downward
Spriling to my fate
Breaking my will
Lost in the fog
I embrace the cold
numbness for my pain
The snapping of my bones
White noise in my head
I sink lower
Reaching for release
Praying for the darkness
Waiting for it to end
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DarkFaerie
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2006-03-12 00:45:08]
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Re: Waiting for it to end
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by amandahoo88 on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:49:24 AM AEST
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| Very powerful. I love it! |
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Re: Waiting for it to end
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by Nothingness on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 05:26:58 AM AEST
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| wow that was great your not alone in your pain we all go through some type of a pain even if its not the same type...well i really hope things get better fast for you |
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Re: Waiting for it to end
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 01:15:36 PM AEST
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| another strong write. i can feel your pain through your words. I hope good times find you soon. be strong. A++++ |
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Re: Waiting for it to end
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:55:27 PM AEST
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wow, fantastic write, the misery, pain.. you express it all perfectly. amazing job.
~natalya |
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