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Six feet under is your fate!!!
Contributed by
Tacosalad
on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:35:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Six feet under,
is your fate.
Don't await,
your fastest death rate.
Your world will rotate.
As your blood begins to vibrate,
and the poison starts to skate,
now to choose what organs to donate.
Your death is on your own hands.
As your brain commands,
and demands,
you'll be buried in the wasteland.
That lie behind your wristbands.
So, hope to god,
your death is classic.
As your life was so tragic,
and drastic.
At your funeral I will not cry,
I will not say good-bye,
or even ask why.
because I hope you die,
with my hate in your eye,
As I rely,
while you pass by,
for all you have done is lie.
Copyright ©
Tacosalad
... [
2006-03-11 22:35:57]
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Re: Six feet under is your fate!!!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:39:46 PM AEST
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| Sound more angry then sad. Good write Hope things get better for you |
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Re: Six feet under is your fate!!!
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by DarkFaerie on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:09:52 AM AEST
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I loved this write, nice and dark how I like it.
So, hope to god,
your death is classic.
As your life was so tragic,
and drastic
Fantastic images. Great job. : ) |
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