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unforgetable
Contributed by
lifeslittleangel
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 02:50:24 PM in AEST
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All the scars are unforgetable the run deep down through my veins,visable or not they are still there haunting my everymove,with no one to understand why i cut so deep down within the vision of the darkness pounding within,the blood that showa no trail as it drips down to the floor,the stares lookin at me when i open the door,the sting of the wet razor against my skin the sharp pain as i cut deeper and deeper within
unforgetable
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Re: unforgetable
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by eggflipper on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 03:47:13 PM AEST
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| wicked imagery. |
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Re: unforgetable
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 07:14:49 AM AEST
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| depression should never be dealt with alone so i'm glad you have someone who can provide support. writing definitely helps relieve some of it...and is defnitely safer than cutting. on another note, haiku poetry consists of 5, 7, and 5 morae or phonetic units and always contains a season word...just for future reference. |
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Re: unforgetable
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:28:24 PM AEST
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nice write. Depression is an ugly thing to deal with. I know. But cutting isn't the answer. It makes it worse....in time you will see. Hang tight.
~Lo |
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