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still too much
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 01:29:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Maybe I am still too much
To let this go
It all comes tumbling back
Flashes of the great
Glimpses of you
As you were
Are you still too much
Of that
That I miss
You all come hurtling back
Much too much
My dream
To let you go,
Love,
Or want to
Copyright ©
reilt
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2006-03-11 13:29:18]
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Re: still too much
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 02:00:58 PM AEST
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beautiful...short & sweet yet still wonderfully expressed
great write
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Re: still too much
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 08:21:22 AM AEST
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A lot of longing expressed in this short piece. Keep writing, and hope on as well.
Andrew |
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