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Haunting Dream
Contributed by
Tamara
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 02:44:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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To say I did not love you
Would be my biggest lie
You drained everything out of me
Leaving me completely dry
My love for you was always strong
But painfully not returned
You took everyting from within me-
The hard way - I have learned
You were always my first priority
But I was always your last
And as I've always thought my dear
And evil spell's been cast
"I no longer love you"
Is the answer to your question
I can not do this anymore
I no longer feel the same affection
I will be your only dream
I will forever haunt you
With all that I am and all I can be-
I'll inject my pain into you
Copyright ©
Tamara
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2006-03-11 02:44:13]
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Re: Haunting Dream
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by dougnut on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 07:55:23 AM AEST
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heartfelt emotion and great feeling in this great read and wonderful write.
life does not always turn out the way we would like.
One sided relationships hurt
I speak from experiance.
Enjoyed the poem but the content was a touch sad.
Hope you find unconditional love.
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Re: Haunting Dream
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:53:30 AM AEST
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| well done full of emotion |
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Re: Haunting Dream
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by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 07:19:05 PM AEST
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painful, but really great write, i hope it all works out for you, and keep on writing.
~natalya |
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