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Behold the Sun
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 01:58:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Behold the sun, how bright
from yonder east it springs,
as if the soul of life and light
were breathing from it's wings.
So bright a light it broke
upon the souls of men;
so fresh the dreaming world awoke
in truthful radiance then!
Before you, sun, arose
stars clustered through the sky-
but oh how dim and pale were those
to this one burning eye...
and truth lent many a ray
to bless the pagan's night-
but just how weak and palid they,
to thy one glories light!
Billy - 2006
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 02:40:02 AM AEST
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Radiantly shining on your page, this is presented so beautifully. Billy, my dear, you are the best of the best.
Rita |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:57:22 AM AEST
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| beautifully written , a joy to read |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by shelby on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 05:42:05 PM AEST
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delightful my friend
Michelle |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by freespirit on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:41:23 PM AEST
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another great write well done
hugs freespirt |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:07:50 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. Rhyme is good, my mind catches any mistake.. need jarred to lend me his glasses.. lol.. go check my poems out, oh nooo... their totally wrong lol... but, they entertained me as I wrote them, you know how it is for old ladies lol..
Oh hope kenty does not read my comment, he told me not to read the comments before the poem lol, and also, lol.. not to write a longer comment than the poem I read lol.
Hi Billy.. you know I have to kid you and jarred, you are both my pals, learn a lot from you two.. huggies..
from this ole gal, raquey |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by wizard on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 09:50:48 AM AEST
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certainly a write full of life. i love this.
wiz |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:20:14 PM AEST
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Gosh, how soft and serene this piece, Billy. It's as dreamy
as watching the sunrise itself ... or the sunset.
*sigh*
Dreams and wishes made me think ... sounds like a love poem
to me, (but it could just be the hopeless romantic in me -- I have
been warned before about reading between the lines ... lol)
In any case, dreams or love, it is shining silver through
and through. Wonderful bit of poetic sweetness. And
gosh, if the flow isn't just perfect, I don't know what is!!
~Breezy |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by brew on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 09:30:46 PM AEST
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Another vivid, and relisation write. What words.........what thoughts left in ones mind. Again, a flowing write and always a pleasure to read your work.
Brew~ |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 08:40:30 PM AEST
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So this would this would be your version of Genesis had G-d asked for your scribe.
Truly beautiful work
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:46:56 PM AEST
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Very uplifting, like the rising sun itself!
Great flow and rhythmn too. Very well done! |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 07:01:07 PM AEST
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~*Billy*~
A heavenly beautiful write penned by the true poetic master of all times. Your work is always captivating and definately always well worth the read. I never tire from reading such remarkable and brilliantly penned masterpieces from u my dear friend.
Keep up the extraordinary work dearest ~*Billy*~
*love always ur friend/fan*
~*sue*~ |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 12:45:54 PM AEST
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Billy,
I agree with what Rita said in her comment, and after I read this , I sat here trying to think of words that could describe how amazing this poem was to me, Stunning , You are the best of the best!!!!!!!
Hugs LG |
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Re: Behold the Sun
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 08:02:09 PM AEST
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| Nicely written. Good work. |
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