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Revere Beach
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 01:47:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Across the bay, a yellow moon plays havoc
with the cloudy constituency
of the breakers-
throwing a charismatic charm
over shape and form and shadow;
alive.. swimming in the dark.
Symphonic waves below
shedding dark pulses of peace
on the craggy foreshore..
stark landscape reaching
for the arrogant moonlight,
hurting me with jagged hints
of simple witchcraft;
memories-
Gradually, joy breaks
surging upon slow waves;
glints of bruised brilliance
shining o're some distant causeway,
routing tired old suspicions-
a blackened shoal to read magic by.
Faces from another time
articulate with love,
rise between the moon and tears;
unbridled from a buried somewhere..
blind and black is the world of sea and sky...
for a long - shimmering moment...
Man On High
Copyright ©
Man_On_High
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2006-03-11 01:47:20]
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Re: Revere Beach
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 02:42:59 AM AEST
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Another poignant piece of you that you so brilliantly share with us. Your talent touches me to the depths of my being. Blessings to you my poetic friend.
Hugs,
Rita
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Re: Revere Beach
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:01:15 AM AEST
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| beautifully written, well done |
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Re: Revere Beach
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:01:03 AM AEST
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| wow, I like this free verse.. the meters were such, I tried to read them as haiku lol. no such luck lol.. although I find, you could easily make a lot of these verses work out for haikus because of the nature ..all content . Oh well, you get what I do mean.. Just silly ole Raquey chatterboxing here. Lovely work.. |
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Re: Revere Beach
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by wizard on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 01:00:48 AM AEST
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great write bro.
you never cease to leave me in awe.
wiz |
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Re: Revere Beach
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 08:12:06 PM AEST
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My God! I'm with wiz ... awe indeed!
Dazzling imagery here, Billy. Absolutely captivating. Each time
I thought a line somehow captured my heart, another one overpowered
the hold. This was a tremendously enjoyable read, (as is all of your
work ... )
"Faces from another time
articulate with love,
rise between the moon and tears"
All I can say is wow! Now, that is poetry.
~Breezy |
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Re: Revere Beach
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:14:12 AM AEST
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~*Billy*~
WoW, my dear friend I'm always left in awe after reading ur superb and outstanding writes. My oh my ~*Billy*~ the imagery u cast into ur readers head is absolutely sensational. Each word and each verse ever so captivating and breath taking. Brilliance and poetic talent at its best. You are in a league of ur own my dear friend. Hats off to u.
*love n hugs always*
~*susie Q*~ |
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