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How Do You Walk Without Falling?
Contributed by
marionette
on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 12:41:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Unbalanced; hold on to yourself
try not to lose yourself.
turn to me gently
don't look at me so cruelly.
like spinning top
when will I stop?
tediously staggering
can't even stay standing.
nothing to hold on to
losing my tattered shoe.
where do I stop? When do I fall?
nobody's standing in front of me after all.
eternal swirls of spinning flow
twirling, falling... vertigo.
can't run towards you, scared of you
scared that you won't have that yearning, too.
that if I stop, this spinning blue
you'd turn away, if I stumble towards you.
Where do I stop? Where do I fall?
Nobody's standing in front of me after all.
Unbalanced but standing
tired, drained, who am I kidding.
Ladies and gentlemen, I'm sorry to say
I'm giving up, waiting for that day.
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marionette
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2006-03-11 00:41:10]
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Re: How Do You Walk Without Falling?
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 02:04:44 AM AEST
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What an all-out amazing song this would make-
Your timing is so natural for such a thing-
I'm thinkin' Motley Crue..(later years)
or even Maroon 5-
I was tappin' my foot the whole way through-
5 from me on this-
Truly-
Billy |
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Re: How Do You Walk Without Falling?
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:07:47 AM AEST
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| well done, a great piece |
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