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YOU STRIP
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:53:34 PM in AEST
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Inocence is so easy to
take away. An adult should
protect a little child. Your
own sexuability amiss. Little
ones have no power to
prevent this.
You strip away childhood
with perverted acts of
molestation to feed your own
illicet soul. What's a tender
soul to do when you only
think of you?
Before you let sickness control,
your libido should think long
and hard. I hear prison ain't fun,
oh no! One thing for sure sex will
turn on you, some pervert's
fantansy fullfilled.
Selfish acts of imortal sensless,
shame will be your demise, take
you down a sick path. Think before
you molest little ones. It's prison
for you, what you've done.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by eggflipper on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:05:28 PM AEST
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| well said. |
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:22:18 PM AEST
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You tell 'em grrlfriend...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:27:50 PM AEST
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Very well said. Unfortunately I don't think the sick ******* will ever listen to you....and prison....probably a bit too kind for the likes of those monsters.
Nice poem though. Your heart is in the right place.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by brokenwings on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 01:32:38 AM AEST
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I CHEER YOU on this write so this is great very true...
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 02:48:24 AM AEST
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Those are the sick perverted demons I would like to "strip" as they hang by their feet from a tall tree as I strip their skin off piece by piece as they do a child's innocence. Death is too fast and I believe they should suffer for a long long time before they descend into the depths of evil beings like themselves. I am generally not a vindictive person, but those sick demons I would love to torture myself.
Great write,
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 06:12:21 AM AEST
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Very well written, I TOTALLY agree. Those people don't know how something like that can destroy a kids life........
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 12:17:17 PM AEST
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This is really good...tells a very sad situation for many kids and people
Shari :) |
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by moses on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 04:10:01 PM AEST
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You strip...the perverts not only stripped the kid but stripped the kid of their innocence. I liked your poem, well said.
keep it up,
-moses |
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by DreamPoetess on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:07:17 AM AEST
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Sigh. Guess my kids won't laugh at me for overprotecting them. When I was not strapped to their hips, I had walkie talkies hooked up to their feet and mine. Cameras stuck everywhere. So what if I bore the teachers, this mother was there. My sons laughed at me when I said get a leash for my grandkids. Do you think I trust a stranger? Good sad write, thank you for it, because it needs to be written for parents and youngsters reading this material.
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 01:53:02 PM AEST
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Emy,emy, emy I take my hat off to you (trust me I don't do it for all the girls!) as I've said in the past I love your unique way of writing...
But! what impresses me more is you have the B**** and maturity to tackle a subject such as this on a community/family poetry site in such a way that gets the right message across and in the process doesn't get you banned.
My opinion?
Hang 'em high!
Very well done indeed.
J
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 08:56:54 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, it sucks that stuff like that actually happens.
Take care.
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by freespirit on
Friday, 17th March 2006 @ 03:01:36 PM AEST
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As always another great poem
god bless
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:03:06 PM AEST
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A great write as always emy straight from the heart. Thanks 4 sharing.
((((emystar))))
Ben |
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:06:48 AM AEST
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emystar
"Suffer not the
children.
Let them come to
Me"
Jesus The Christ
"The least you do
for one of these
You do unto Me"
Their punnishment
will come.
Sinned
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by slogan on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 08:15:19 PM AEST
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| excellent write..I really enjoyed reading your work....awesome piece of work...jh |
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 02:33:41 PM AEST
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In the Lord's eye a sin is a sin. It should be the same in our own eyes. Keeping us out of judgment. However, it is my belief when our sin leads to another's sin or another's demise we have went beyond the simplicity of a normal sin. I agree with your statement here and think you have put this is a very appropriate way.
WELL DONE!
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:12:13 AM AEST
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I totally agree and these people should be punished beyond jail. There are to many children in this world that u are speeking for with this poem sadly enough. Your voice is a stand though.... thank u.
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Re: YOU STRIP
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 04:33:42 PM AEST
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| Excellent |
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