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You never go away...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 08:02:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your stunning eyes
Occasional tears
Underlying flaws
Romantic jestures
Meaningful words
Envious tendencies
Mesmorizing prescence
Overwhelming strength
Resounding laughs
Your captivating smile
Hypnotizing glances
Amazing sense of humor
Understanding ways
Nervous tapping
Talkitive side
Silent worrying
Magical actions
Entrancing movements
Embarrassing moments
Victorious achievments
Encompassing caresses
Reminded constantly of
You.....
Day after day after day
All this I remember about you
You may have left me, but you never go away....
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
... [
2006-03-10 20:02:11]
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Re: You never go away...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 08:58:46 PM AEST
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Oh, gosh, this was beautiful. So simple the words and yet done with
such a creative flair. Wonderful write. Like a hug for the heart.
~Breezy |
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Re: You never go away...
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by brokenwings on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:05:31 PM AEST
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i liked the style of this write.. it is very emotional, and true. good write
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Re: You never go away...
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by DarkFaerie on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:38:54 PM AEST
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| ive always loved this poem. great write : ) |
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Re: You never go away...
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by thesinner on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:15:54 PM AEST
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Holder, this is simple yet so touching.
I enjoyed.
p.s FL still warm?
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Re: You never go away...
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by emystar on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 11:37:34 PM AEST
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Awesome write. Very creative.
I can certainly relate. I think any one that reads it can relate in one way or the other.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: You never go away...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 03:00:10 AM AEST
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| Hope that you can find somebody else to take this feeling away that you can love more than you could ever realize. I liked it the first time you wrote and i know how much work you put into it the second time. Excellent write |
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Re: You never go away...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 03:26:49 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. Touched my heart as i was reading it. A lot of thruth your words hold. i
like your style, and emotional approach. very
lovely peice of writting.
Ben |
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