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Believe me dad
Contributed by
asha1uk
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Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:48:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Accusations flying around
Family members involved
Two different sides of the story
Will it ever be solved
Talk to me i;m listening
And i take your side
But i have a doubt in mind
What if you have lied
Daughter of mine so precious
Are you one hundred per cent
If so we'll stand by you
I'm sorry for being hesitant
Both families now fallen apart
Call it very strong morals
Now we have to be prepared
For all those nasty quarrels
Family close not any more
Disruption to our lives
Daughter of mine no burden to carry
Forget their made up lies
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asha1uk
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2006-03-10 18:48:59]
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Re: Believe me dad
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by dougnut on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 08:19:39 AM AEST
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Emotional poem,
Touched my heart,
I think in these situations, One person needs
to take control & try to mediate.
Family problems and the problems of everyday
day life are difficult The best way to sollve a
family argument is to give a hug. and show your love by your actions.
Thanks for sharing this true event Poem with us.
God Bless you all & i hope peace can be
restored .
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Re: Believe me dad
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 09:17:44 AM AEST
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| a very touching write, well done |
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Re: Believe me dad
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by asha1uk on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:46:08 PM AEST
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| many thanks for your comments, need to get back on here soon as, i need to read more poems on here and comment myself.......... |
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Re: Believe me dad
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by asha1uk on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:46:11 PM AEST
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| many thanks for your comments, need to get back on here soon as, i need to read more poems on here and comment myself.......... |
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Re: Believe me dad
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by asha1uk on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:46:17 PM AEST
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| many thanks for your comments, need to get back on here soon as, i need to read more poems on here and comment myself.......... |
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Re: Believe me dad
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by Bolts on
Sunday, 23rd January 2011 @ 09:05:12 AM AEST
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| A topic with which many can empathize, good use of rhyme and nicely structured in my opinion. Not sure the last two lines quite fit, but that's just me being picky. I like this poem. |
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