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Burn, Baby!

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:29:25 PM in AEST
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Burn, baby, burn! Let the fire take you. Feel your sins wash away in flames. Bleed, baby, bleed! Make everything red. Turn the world around into a flood of life and death. Breathe, baby, breathe! You’ve got time left. Let’s make these days last, just you and me forever…
Sing, baby, sing! Sing for me. Let me hear your voice call from every wall. Cry, baby, cry! Let all that anger out. Forget the past, look towards the future, because I’m here now.
Burn, baby, burn! You’re a sinner now; you’ve tasted me and won’t be looking back until the deed is done. Bleed, baby, bleed! Let me see you cringe. Let me see you feel the pain I feel inside. Breathe, baby, breathe! Time is running out, there’s only seconds left before your death comes crashing down.
Kiss me! Kiss me! There’s only us left now. Forget this place, we’re leaving somewhere else. Forget this pain, it’s all over now.
Hold me. Hit me! Make me scream your name! Make me ask for mercy and then start again! Sin, baby, sin! I want to see you confess. Smoke that cigarette; it’ll be your last!
Burn, baby, burn! You’re burning in the fire that you see in my eyes. Bleed, baby, bleed! This is your last chance to be part of something more…Breathe, baby, breathe! Take that last breath before you drown…before time runs out.
Hold me. Kiss me. Hit me some more. I want to feel the pain again. I want to feel you with me to the end.

Copyright Â© MG_Akela22090 ... [ 2006-03-10 18:29:25]
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Re: Burn, Baby! (User Rating: 1 )
by 5MinutePoet on Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 12:04:56 PM AEST
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It's not quite anarchy, it's not exactly organised. There is method to the madnes which is what i like. You had something inspire you and you put your head down and put it into words, i like the rustic charm. It's ironic though, i checked out both the most read and least read in this topic, and it just goes to show that the majority opinion is usually ignored for a reason. Happy first comment

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