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another love story
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
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the greatest form of love for me
is the one that drags you through the ups and downs
the beauty i see in you is from the ugliness you show me
i wasn't lacking in comfort but in loneliness
its not the happiness i was missing but the misery
not order but chaos
i haven't been searching for myself
i've been looking for you and your imperfections
but in a way you are me, i know, i can tell
im not looking for the way but for misdirection
not sanity but dementia
we can be happy in misery
i know this cause i am you and you are me
you know this cause you're searching to be free
i dont need a perfect love to bind my soul
i need chaos in order to have control
so take my hand as i reach for yours
not freedom but imprisonment
not knowledge but stupidity
not wisdom but ignorance
its not love but you will do.
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2003-01-30 02:00:00]
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Re: another love story
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:53:30 AM AEST
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| this is really strong, dark, and deep...you express an interesting emotion very well. i'm a little confused how it can be a poem about true love when it ends with 'its not love but you will do' - which suggests, to me at least, settling for second best. always hold out for the right one - you'll find them when you least expect it. anyway, great write - keep them coming - Kate xxx |
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Re: another love story
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 07:41:15 PM AEST
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| maybe second best is all there is |
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Re: another love story
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 04:35:35 PM AEST
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| i can't believe that :) call me a romantic but i think you just gotta hold on a little longer for the right one....they're out there. happy searching.... |
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Re: another love story
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by undead_poet14 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:09:30 PM AEST
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^_^ that touched me deep, man... this is an awesome, sweet yet dark poem!... simply wonderful... keep up that great work!
=::= The Undead Poet =::= |
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