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From one soul to another
Contributed by
lamc6977
on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:58:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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From one soul to another,
"What's going on with this race?"
Accusing, abusing, a constant smack in the face
From one soul to another,
"What's wrong with this planer earth?"
Feeling so out of place here,
since the moment of my birth
From one soul to another,
"How can all this be?!"
Money, fame and fortune,
such a "priority"
From one soul to another,
"We were placed here with a path to follow"
Though it does get hard sometimes,
so many so cold and hollow
From one soul to another,
"There must be something we can do"
Simply look inside yourself & to yourself be true
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2006-03-10 09:58:24]
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Re: From one soul to another
(User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:57:07 AM AEST
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Love this poem, it speeks all the right words.
Being part of two races myself I listen for the rude comments of people and when I hear them , oh do they hear my voice too.
LOVE LOVE LOVED everything about this poem.
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Re: From one soul to another
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by Vermilion on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 01:01:05 PM AEST
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| A very truthful poem. Well fitted together, flows well, all the right words. A good write. Keep it up. |
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