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Slow Seduction
Contributed by
spike
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Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:56:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She slips quietly into bed, but
She is not ready for sleep,
The snaking hands of her lover
Smoothly, quietly
Cupping one breast, then the other
Yet..........
She is not ready for love, so
Pushing aside the amorous intent,
Seeks solace in inner peace
Gently, calmly
And not that other, sweet release
But...........
Even as she starts to relax, the
tranquility disappears
Undermined
Slowly, surely
By erotic whispers in her ears
So..........
The hands finally win, and
She succumbs to the touch
Of her lover
Eagerly, completely
Opening herself, only to discover
That..........
Now she is ready for dreams, under
The sweet cover of sleep
Wherein she finds her bliss
Easily, completely
Her journey sealed with a final kiss
Ah..........
HA!
Copyright ©
spike
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2006-03-10 06:56:03]
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Re: Slow Seduction
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:34:52 PM AEST
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| nice poem, haha, the ending had me cracking up.......lol ;D |
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Re: Slow Seduction
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:50:54 PM AEST
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Oh my, my, my ... spike, you naughty, naughty boy! lol
This was wonderful. A slow seduction indeed!
(and what a seduction it was too!) man oh man!
[is it hot in here or what??]
I can't even muster a proper critque of this ... so breathless am I !!
Yeah. You might say I enjoyed this one, S.
EXCEEDINGLY !!
~B |
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Re: Slow Seduction
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th March 2006 @ 07:14:30 AM AEST
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lol nice one!
J |
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Re: Slow Seduction
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 10:44:21 PM AEST
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Diffrent for you and yet, not.
Somehow I can actually see you smiling as you wrote this. |
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Re: Slow Seduction
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 11:11:04 AM AEST
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| Such a tasteful seduction! Such a flow of loving. You're the wordsmith, so I ask you, "Is there a superlative to SUPERB?" Now I'm goin' to go read "Humble Wordsmith". Your postings are like a book I can't put down! |
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Re: Slow Seduction
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by Jen54 on
Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 07:51:13 PM AEST
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Great Poem!!! I love the pic at the end. Keep It Up
-Jen |
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