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Forgetting You
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 06:24:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I've let go
of you and everything we had
finally it doesn't hurt so bad
I've already forgotten
you taste and your touch
what's left to forget isn't much
I've forgotten
you smile and your laugh
now I'm tryin to tear up your photograph
i've forgotten
almost everything about you
have you already forgotten me too?
I've already forgotten
the way you made me felt
you had me feeling as if i could melt
these tears that fall
from my eyes
they won't stop, they won't dry
not soon enough these tear will go away
and i will have forgotten them too
just like im forgetting you.
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Re: Forgetting You
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by Naughtygurl on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 08:03:09 AM AEST
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This is a hott poem, it looks like you put alot of feeling into it and i love it alot. seriously i think that everyone has felt like that, and even if you arnt feeling this way now, you must have felt it before. Good Job.
**Britt**
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Re: Forgetting You
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by brittaney on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 08:37:40 PM AEST
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I really like the way you set up this poem. Its really origional. I like MUCHO!!
Brittaney~ |
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Re: Forgetting You
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by wild_girl121 on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 11:13:35 PM AEST
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| forgetting is something that is hard to do... and trying your hardest wont alway work. do what you feel is right |
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Re: Forgetting You
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by forgottenone_iam on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 04:13:43 PM AEST
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wow that was a good poem i know exactly what your going through cuz i am going through the same thing as you...good poem
Kim |
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Re: Forgetting You
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by Concrete_Rose on
Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 01:45:29 PM AEST
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| VERY NICE, I LOVE IT, GOOD WRITE. |
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Re: Forgetting You
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by PieceOfABrokenSoul on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 10:52:04 PM AEST
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| great write, i've been in situations where forgetting is the hardest thing to do like the jackie situation that you commented on two years ago. anyway, thanks for the great read, you should check out some of my newer stuff when you're on again |
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