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Please forgive me
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 01:30:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i'm sorry for what i've done
i'm sorry for who i am
i wish that i can be the man you want to take your hand
i'm sorry that i told you lies
i'm sorry for that i let you down
i wish that i could make you laugh, but all you do is frown
i never wanted it to hurt so bad
when i let it out
i never wanted you to just keep quiet
i wanted to hear you shout
i wish that i can make it up, but i probably won't get the chance
i told you all i did
and you just turned away
i tried to comfort you in the best way
but that made you hate me more
i wish that i can change the past so i can't hurt you any more
i'm writing this to let you know exactly how i feel
i want it all to be clear
i want you to understand
i would like to be forgivien
for not being the man i said i would be
if you have it in your heart
Please...forgive me
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2006-03-10 01:30:36]
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Re: Please forgive me
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by tears_of_blood on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 02:58:35 AM AEST
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| thats one strong poem man i know what your trying to say with every word it hits me like a rock i was once that guy the one that couldent be trusted i let my girl down more then once she give me a chance to show the real me hope yours well do the same and if not hope you get that forgivnis you ask for. |
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Re: Please forgive me
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by dougnut on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:26:38 AM AEST
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Heartfelt words here . expessed with emotion.
Hope you gave her a copy.!
Some people forgive But its harder to forget.
Trust and honesty must be earned I am sure you will learn that.
and move on. Good luck .
Dougnut |
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