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My Cookie
Contributed by
Drapes
on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:42:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A soft golden circle,
Flat and round.
Gooey rich chocolate
Hidden in buttery dough.
So appealing.
Just a bite
Will satisfy my need.
Just a taste
To see what it's like.
Give it a chance.
I spot the treasure,
It appears so close.
The distance so short.
I delicately reach
For this prized sweet.
My arm outstretched,
My finger tips
Gently brush the edge
And a few crumbs fall to the ground.
I am touching my dream,
It's within my reach.
So clear in my view,
But I just can't grasp it.
I just can't grasp it.
I just can't grasp it.
I just can't grasp the love of my desire.
I just can't grasp the love.
I just can't grasp this love.
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Drapes
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2006-03-09 18:42:42]
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Re: My Cookie
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by Alison on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:00:38 PM AEST
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| hey i really liked it. i thought it was really cute at first but then the ending was awesome! |
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Re: My Cookie
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by thesinner on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:11:29 PM AEST
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| Really creative. I liked it. Good write |
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Re: My Cookie
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:08:55 AM AEST
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That is very interesting
I love the imagery and it's definatly new and creative
thanks for posting a comment on my poem
not many do
so i really appreciate it. =) |
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Re: My Cookie
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by StephaniePaige on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 11:25:19 AM AEST
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I like it.
At first, I thought it was more cutsie, but toward the end I got that..maybe it was metaphorical? |
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