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You Leave Me
Contributed by
brittaney
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:39:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You leave me curious,
You leave me confused.
You punched me hard,
And left a bruise.
How hard I wonder,
How angry I feel.
And still you act,
Like it's no big deal.
My heart is stained,
My pain is strong.
Deep down I hated,
You all along.
I still will laugh,
I still will cry.
I do still wish,
That you would die.
Dont think for a second,
I'll take you back.
And if you do,
You're a maniac.
My life will go on,
And so will yours.
So I'll burn our bridge,
And shut the door.
Copyright ©
brittaney
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2006-03-09 18:39:07]
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Re: You Leave Me
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by Alison on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:10:50 PM AEST
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| wow u go! that rocks! good 4 u! |
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Re: You Leave Me
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by moses on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:18:52 PM AEST
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Well done, breakups always have been a big deal to me too, ive written countless poems about them.
Filled with emotion, yet not too complex, i liked it a lot.
keep it up,
-moses |
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Re: You Leave Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:35:01 PM AEST
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Whoa...powerful stuff.
You've got a real good flow thing goin' there. Very very good indeed.
Keep it up and thank you for sharing.
Tim
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Re: You Leave Me
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 07:49:17 PM AEST
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| strong write! gets your point across well. you shouldn't ever stand for abuse! great job with your poem A++++ best of luck to you |
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Re: You Leave Me
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 07:10:51 PM AEST
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Brittaney
I hope you mean it and keep this pansy--Pat away.
Any man who respects a woman would never strike her.
I feel hurt and anger in your poem.
As far as hate I say pray he change,but burn that bridge.
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