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How it Hurts
Contributed by
brittaney
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:28:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Bewildered, Puzzled, Hurt and Mad.
Dissipointed, Stumped, Curious and Sad.
Angry Wonder, Pain and Comfused,
Hopeless, Fury and Feeling abused.
Copyright ©
brittaney
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2006-03-09 18:28:38]
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Re: How it Hurts
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:33:31 PM AEST
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lots of emotions captured well in this write, well done!!
take care
pix xx |
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Re: How it Hurts
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:48:06 PM AEST
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| a interesting write with alot to say |
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Re: How it Hurts
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by 01_zanzebar on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 07:48:13 PM AEST
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you had a brilliant chance to captivate by NOT RHYMING!!!!
the best kept audiance is that of one that is mystifyed
and an audiance that understans the layout is a bored one
you cant be what you want to be
if you simply
play
out
to
what
youre
expected
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Re: How it Hurts
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by moses on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:25:32 PM AEST
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I liked, its so short yet captures so much so efficiently.
Well done and keep it up,
-moses |
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