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The Devils Kiss
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:24:42 PM in AEST
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One kiss and he can ruin your soul,
Off your lips his dark words roll,
He softly whispers your name,
To him stealing your dreams is just a game.
Your body is his for the taking,
Suffer will you his torment and raping,
Darkness and pain is your best friend,
Just give in and don’t you pretend.
You love it, as dark pleasure reigns,
You have to let go you can’t refrain,
It’s too tempting to resist,
In your dark places the devil has kissed.
He takes control over body and mind,
Into his labyrinth you are confined,
Destined to be your masters slave,
Letting his love see you into an early grave.
He is sexual and he is filled with power,
He will take you to your darkest hour,
Impregnating you with his seed,
Where inside his evil can begin to breed
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by brittaney on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:30:33 PM AEST
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Wow, this poem is REALLY REALLY good. You use words really colorfully. I really like this poem, you are an AWESOME poet!
Brittaney~ |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by Amazon on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:59:34 PM AEST
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I love this poem, and i love how you talk about how even though you are threatened by the "devils kiss" it still intreges you and draws you in i know that feeling all to well
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by 01_zanzebar on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 07:46:44 PM AEST
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it
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bland
and
innofencive |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by hoist1atca on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 09:16:25 PM AEST
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Hi...
After giving it a second thought I decided to post a reply to your poem-
You are an exceptional writer-
Some people on this site are all wraped up in themselves so they post words that make them feel superior to others-
My only advice to you or anyone else who chooses to share their talents is this-
"Always write with your heart and not your mind...Thoughts tend to change as feelings always remain..."
Do not let anyone change who you are by allowing them to cause alterations in the way you write...
I have stoped poasting here because of all the masterminds and expert poets that try to cause changes in others to make their (talents) superior...
Take care and I shall continue to read...
Joe
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 03:36:18 AM AEST
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| wow amazing |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 08:14:27 AM AEST
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Yes he is.
1 John 5:19 |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by DarkFaerie on
Sunday, 12th March 2006 @ 12:33:25 AM AEST
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Amazing write, like always : )
Simply fantastic images. |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 02:17:25 PM AEST
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A brilliant description of the maker of sin, and bonder of fleshly burdens. I love the way you rendered the idea of the devil as a sexual and tempting thing. Nothing could be further from the truth. He is just that, a seducer of all things inside of us. Your work here is so compelling, as always.
- SCM |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st March 2006 @ 08:48:36 AM AEST
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Great write pix he really is an evil B****** aint he?
Well worth 5 stars.
J
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by rapnificent on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:35:44 AM AEST
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| Intrigung poem. |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by rapnificent on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 09:37:32 AM AEST
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| Intriguing. |
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Re: The Devils Kiss
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by moonlightrose on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 12:03:51 AM AEST
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This poem is amazing.
-Luna |
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