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Variables and You
Contributed by
merry
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 03:01:09 PM in AEST
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Indecision sits on a knife edge bleeding
I thought there were tears in your eyes
Having said nothing at all when you begged for words
I feel guilt slash my throat
Wish I could change everything about us
Saving the best for last
Ride off into the sunset
We could still go if we wanted to
But we don't want it enough
Our feet stuck in the mire of everyday
We mumble excuses on the telephone
Ending with I love you
Copyright ©
merry
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2006-03-09 15:01:09]
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Re: Variables and You
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by Inevitable on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 03:23:24 PM AEST
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| I really liked this. It was raw and emotional. Kudos. |
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Re: Variables and You
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 04:40:16 PM AEST
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| An excellent way to describe the dreams of lovers unfulfilled. |
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