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once upon a time
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:07:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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this doesn't start out with once upon a time...
but once upon a time you were mine.
then one day it all fell apart
and it left me with a broken heart.
in time we learned to hate eachohter.
and move on with holding that grudge.
now we don't even speak.
how did we get here.
how do we go from eachotheres lifes
to wishing we neve crossed paths
i guess we're just too old
for once upon a time
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brokenwings
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2006-03-09 14:07:03]
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Re: once upon a time
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:07:46 PM AEST
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| yeah i forgot to spell check.. |
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Re: once upon a time
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:12:27 PM AEST
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Good poem. Very sad. I can relate. my ex used to be my world but now he is nothing to me and he hurt me so bad but i have found a new love in my life and with him i am happy..
take care
christina |
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Re: once upon a time
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by Alison on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 03:10:22 PM AEST
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| great poem! loved it |
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Re: once upon a time
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by pixie on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:30:31 PM AEST
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very emotional and deep,such a sad and moving poem. Well expressed!!!
hugs
pix xx |
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Re: once upon a time
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 05:35:35 PM AEST
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this is so...amazing. one of those poems that make you wanna cry. :'(
Heartbreak sux
- Beth - |
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