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Perfect Situation at the Wrong Time

Contributed by Jazzy on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 12:02:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It seems like only yesterday we started...

A perfect situation at the wrong time...

I blinked and now I'm left here Broken Hearted...

Not moving , all I can do is cry....

This feeling ... overwhelming underwater , drowning...

I'm fine in front of them but my soul is always frowning...

I'm freezing in the summer,It snows here in my June...

The night time comes but I can't see, you've stolen the light from my once bright moon...

My memories of your skin on my skin, and breathing your whole perfection in....

Darling that to me was the sweetest of sins...

But perfection turned to tragedy, and love , and sweet emotion turned into pain...

Our sweet conversations and making love by candelight, were quickly destroyed by a torrent of rain...

The rain from my eyes that falls without stopping, and the storm from my heart that no hurricane is topping...

May Kharma never find for YOU ARE THE WEAK ONE and you would die inside...

For you my former darling thought this the perfect situation at the wrong time...







Copyright © Jazzy ... [ 2006-03-09 12:02:15]
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Re: Perfect Situation at the Wrong Time (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:10:54 PM AEST
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this was very emotional, felt my heart telling me "yup babe we've been here before" good write..

tasha


Re: Perfect Situation at the Wrong Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 03:22:12 PM AEST
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great write! very moving...


Re: Perfect Situation at the Wrong Time (User Rating: 1 )
by moses on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 05:32:13 PM AEST
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Really liked it and can totally relate...full of emotion , i know what your going thru/gone thru.

Well done and keep up the good work,
-moses




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