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The Book of Life Part X
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 10:31:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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This pit leads to the Dragons Liar
I still do not think it fair
That I so small and meek
Have to try to be strong when weak
But here I am armed with dart and heart
And this Dragon from my realm will depart
So enter into the Dragons home
I go with my weapons of stone
Sleeping deeply I see the beast
Enormous and fierce to say the least
I no longer can tears cry
I let out a very loud sigh
My mistake!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dragon now awake!!!!!!
Fire he spews!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is not good news!!!
So I duck real low
His eyes start to glow
The jade dart I throw
My target is narrow
Hitting him in the eye
A spot on his chest I spy
There I run with the heart
Giving the Dragon a start
This quartz is pure love
From heavens above
It the evil dispels
The dragon is banished to hell
I gave up my tears
To end my peoples fears
I gave up my future
No children will I nurture
Now I give up my earthly life
For I am pulled apart by much strife
Turned to pure energy am I
So truly although my body did die
I will forever pure love be
Through Eternity
In the book
Of
Live
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-03-09 10:31:50]
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Re: The Book of Life Part X
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by thesinner on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:30:31 AM AEST
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| Fantastic. I really have enjoyed this series. Excellent work. |
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Re: The Book of Life Part X
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by The_Phantom on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:09:07 PM AEST
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Well done, had me tune until this the end, awsome write, loved it.
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Re: The Book of Life Part X
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 08:09:24 PM AEST
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yeah!!! you did it, courage.. you saved many before you were taken to the most greatest place. Thank you character for your courage and tears and for saving them.. now the rest can live without fear and they have the book written to know what was done so they can know and live in peace and live forever.. and ever...
huggies,
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Re: The Book of Life Part X
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th March 2006 @ 01:59:57 PM AEST
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I have been away for a few days and missed the many parts of this, but since last night I have been catching up. Though I decided to only comment when this was over. I am currently in the process of copying each chapter to a file, so that I can read them as an entire piece without break.
This comment is on the reading with the breaks. I was captured by the story from the beginning, and was overwhelmed by the many levels it moved. The ending itself, an inspiration to any who read this. A well done, master work from an extremely talented poet whose work has cradled me from the first of hers I read.
I hope you dive into something epic, like this again. I am anxious to see something like this. Each chapter was a true poem unto itself, and together they make a grand painting of passion and courage.
My hats off to you on this major poetic accomplishment!
SUPERB!
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