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A World Of Your Own
Contributed by
givingin
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 10:26:37 AM in AEST
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A world of your own
Devine belief in my soul,
I see the end that you hold,
swiftly and surely you will fall,
but not before I call.
My voice so cold,
dying softly by your side,
I hold onto the love of night,
the rose now wilts away.
Crimson are the tears,
despair is in the field,
searching for something lost,
you find it in your mind.
Your reality is found,
your emotions now torn,
you run from the things you fear,
you fear itself.
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Re: A World Of Your Own
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:00:20 AM AEST
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it was a really great poem, but i have really no clue what it's about.... maybe like...running away from yourself? or um...or like getting a reality check that was already in the corner of your mind but only now do you realize..? lol ya i don't konw but i loved it.
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Re: A World Of Your Own
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:48:31 AM AEST
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This is a really great poem. I am not dure what you wanted it to mean or to be about exactly but you know what it means so that is really all that matters. This poem was very sad and emotional to me as well as dark. I liked it alot.
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Re: A World Of Your Own
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by Jazzy on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 12:09:39 PM AEST
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You are such a good poet, that this poem can mean a world of thing to billions of people all walking away from this poem with a little piece of you in themselves because everyone realtes to words and described emotions in their own way, to me it seems that someone has had to face a reality one that doesnt seem face-able ,if thats even a word, but the person that this poem is about ... is apparently strong and can make it through this obstical either in mind,body or soul...spirit is the word... thats what it seems to be but who knows for sure except for the author who is very talented... good work sweets i enjoyed it a great deal ...
~~~luv and respect Jazzy |
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Re: A World Of Your Own
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by eggflipper on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 05:06:26 PM AEST
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Now who can resist an offer to solve the riddle. Suicide.
Nice work by the way.
A great PR move if you don't mind. Individuals will see what they want, regardless of what you write. Intentions are only naked when YOU dispose of the clothing. |
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Re: A World Of Your Own
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 05:49:03 PM AEST
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We have nothing to fear but fear itself. I too think it's about sucide. Write about it if u must but for God's sake don't do it!
It's easy to die but the true test in life is to live.
Be bold and hold on.
huggs, prayers,
emy |
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