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Of a Spotless Mind
Contributed by
weepingprophet
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Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:37:04 AM in AEST
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I erased you today
in a bottle of vodka
forgot to tell you
that you don't exist anymore
but why keep leading you on
this is the ending we've grown to adore
I embraced you today in my blade
how your lies fit in my hand so regrettfully
all the while your smile assures
that hurting myself is settling dead scores
come on keep it up-your smile fades eventually-
I can wait
I encase you today
with the promise of my let go
surrender your pretensive
i know you're just a show
how i love to hate you
I have held you-cherished-
I have let you go-bitterly-
I can wait for tomorrow
while knowing, eventually acknowledging
-today is eternal-
and oh i love to hate you
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2006-03-09 02:37:04]
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Re: Of a Spotless Mind
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 05:17:10 AM AEST
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wow. that was one of the most powerful-passion-filled pieces i have read in a long time. So raw, emotive, heart wrenching.
"forgot to tell you
that you don't exist anymore"
i absolutely adored this piece.
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Re: Of a Spotless Mind
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 02:14:25 PM AEST
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| this was truely amazing how hurt and emotional this write is.. i loved it.. |
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Re: Of a Spotless Mind
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by Lilly-Quill on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 08:25:08 PM AEST
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The thing with love/hate seduction is that they it starts out with the most subtlest of emotions; the envy/ admiration syndrome which eventually leads to hate. The thing that I find really strange, in secular religious circles, is: with all the biblical story telling going on, none ever try and explain why it was that God had his weeping-prophet to take a prostitute as a wife (as in Hosea‘s case). Personally, I still think God gets lonely and want us ‘to be able to relate to him (in-light of the way He sees things).’
Sorry for rambling so, but your muse does have a “thought-provoking dynamic” to it.
Uniquely and profoundly ascribed~!
~Lilly-Quill
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