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The Train keeps moving...
Contributed by
Alison
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:17:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The train keeps moving.
The rain keeps falling.
I wonder where I am going,
You left me on that day,
You said goodbye and walked away.
So there I could never stay.
I wonder where I am going,
I wonder if I’ll get there,
I am wondering forever,
I am wondering.. to forget.
Nothing is the same,
The sky has changed,
The wind is black,
Clouds, I think they are.
Filling the sky.
But the train is moving on and on,
Down the track, far, far from you,
The train never stops moving.
Swelling over the sky keeps falling.
Nothing but what is unseen,
The sound of silence surrounds me.
You walked away for reasons unsaid,
I wonder if I will ever know why.
I wonder how far I must go.
The blackness is up and down.
But the train keeping moving,
And the rain keeps falling.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-03-08 22:17:03]
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Re: The Train keeps moving...
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by Ineedanap on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:21:59 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Great imagery |
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Re: The Train keeps moving...
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by whiteleo1984 on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 11:19:12 PM AEST
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| very nice, good figurative language... very wonderful |
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