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Why?
Contributed by
kerrbear
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:15:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Everyone would always wonder
Why she constantly cried
It was too late to help her
She felt it was her time to say goodbye
I remember walking down the hall
And seeing her standing there
Tears running down her face
Because she thought no one cared
But people really did care
She just didn't realize
She thought her life was so bad
And ended it, leaving people wondering why
I since often wonder why
At such a young age
Life for her was so bad
She felt like she was locked in a cage
A cage she could never get out of
Where she would never be free
Well, now she's left that all behind
It's sad the way it had to be
I'm sure now she's above her friends
Free as a bird she's flying
Her new life has made amends
With happiness she now knows exists
Copyright ©
kerrbear
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2006-03-08 22:15:12]
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Re: Why?
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by Ineedanap on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:20:41 PM AEST
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I really liked it. Towards the end it kinda dropped off, like you didn't know how to word it but it was still a great poem. Greta sense of understanding
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Re: Why?
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by dougnut on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 05:03:44 AM AEST
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Difficult subject.
I think you handled it well in this sad but sensitive Post.
Great write enjoyed reading.
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Re: Why?
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by brittaney on
Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 06:51:36 PM AEST
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| AWW thats such a touching poem. You used the words really well. My cousin recently shot himself... |
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