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life does fall
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:24:04 PM in AEST
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i look at the past that has befallen
all my penates built just like a wall
i have hurt many and have done plenty
and i regreat it all
but boy does life fall
grown up doesnt really mean a thing anymore
the youth have power that they hold
the worlds made for them and they like to spend
but boy does life like to fall
older but not wiser i see that notings diffrent
still no respect as time grows long
but like this song they see nothing wrong
boy life bloody falls
now to the future i have forsaken
cold and drained i wallow on the floor
is this the end or should my life extend
boy where does life go wrong
boy where does life go wrong
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Re: life does fall
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:43:35 PM AEST
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strong write, sorta sad but rather realistic perspective on things, great job
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Re: life does fall
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by eggflipper on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:06:14 PM AEST
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| I get the sense of someone who has lost the invincibility shield that comes with being a teenager. Adulthood is about accepting responsibilities for other people. In the end, age bring togetherness. |
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Re: life does fall
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 09:36:05 PM AEST
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| We must always look forward.The future can be bright, sometimes you just have to give it a chance. |
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