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Gone
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:06:21 PM in AEST
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I heard all the voices
Telling me to move on
But my heart can be so stubborn
And it just seems so wrong
You always used to tell me:
When faith seems so far away
And love hised in the dark
You can come to me and hopefully
I can chase all the shadows away
Choking on all my fears
Trying to fight back all the tears
Saying that it will be alright
I cry out while praying
Let me lose the fight. Let me drown tonight
You left me and I don't know how
Who can I go to now
When all seems so wrong
I miss you by my side
I'm dying because now you're gone
I'm crying because now you're gone
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2006-03-08 17:06:21]
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Re: Gone
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by moses on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:30:41 PM AEST
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Nicce...I really like it, well done.
Keep it all up,
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Re: Gone
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:47:30 PM AEST
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it's great because so many will be able to relate, sorta put their own spin to it. But really awesome write.
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Re: Gone
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:35:53 PM AEST
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Awww... That last stanza really got to me.. It's so terrible, it ends utterly lonely.
This is very good. I like the shifting rhyme scheme, it works really well, and isn't too obvious.
Simple, yet effective writing. I really like this.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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