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I Found an Old Sweater of Yours
Contributed by
eggflipper
on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I found an old sweater of yours tonight.
I held it tight to my face,
I had no choice
for lonely eyes gaze upon
memories
and a lonely nose
appreciates the smell of sweat.
Your fragrance still lingers
in the wool,
the shoulders remember
your curves,
the arms draped down my chest
and I remembered our nights alone.
And I sighed breaths of comfort
at the fibres that swept my skin
for they forced a tear
to slowly kiss my face.
Copyright ©
eggflipper
... [
2006-03-08 14:52:57]
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Re: I Found an Old Sweater of Yours
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by trini on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 04:52:16 PM AEST
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Aw. this was so beautiful.
Love poems these days are amazing. I truely appreciate your write.
Thanks for sharing it. You pulled a few heart string on this one.
keep up the great work
-trini |
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Re: I Found an Old Sweater of Yours
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by thesinner on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:53:28 PM AEST
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Beautiful. especially loved the last part.
"And I sighed breaths of comfort
at the fibres that swept my skin
for they forced a tear
to slowly kiss my face."
exquisite.
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Re: I Found an Old Sweater of Yours
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:41:15 PM AEST
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ah yes . . . I am akin to this type of nostalgia. This was a lovely
bit of poetry, albeit dripping with unmistakable sadness.
You have a wonderful way with words.
Incredibly moving this was ...
~Breezy |
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Re: I Found an Old Sweater of Yours
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:53:58 PM AEST
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Simple, but moving and lyrical. A beautiful piece.
Andrew |
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Re: I Found an Old Sweater of Yours
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 09:01:46 PM AEST
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sweetly sad! you can picture this scene, you did a great job! and i love the last two lines "they forced a tear to slowly kiss my face"
beautiful! |
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Re: I Found an Old Sweater of Yours
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 10:44:32 PM AEST
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*sigh*
This is so sad... I love how you've said everything in this, how just that moment revealed so much to you.
As Andrew said, this is simple, but I do think it's very well done.
You write freestyle well.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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