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Live Lady Alive
Contributed by
Dupa
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:09:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Renewed like a snowdrop in May
I say
I love you my Lady of Fate
Today
You grasp me so steadily and wait
Embraced
Recall my words for you
My thanks never breaks
I have warred in flames
Pained
You numbed it away
I recovered
you saved
You have me drawn in now
Last breath you have given
Revived a soul striken
The grief
It is ridden
You saved
Oh, you saved
You showed me my way
My dreams you reshaped them
You brought them to head
You made me some clothing
with nothing but thread
The ocean it chilled
though your passion embraced
The life of my life
It sprung from your faith
I live now to show you
It was not in vain
The pain you took for me
Each tear I repay
My shame, no longer
My dear, how you saved
My dear, my dear, my dear
How you saved
Copyright ©
Dupa
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Re: Live Lady Alive
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:51:05 AM AEST
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Re: Live Lady Alive
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 07:47:10 AM AEST
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Dupa, this was for me a beautiful way of
expressing thanks for unfathomable deeds of
good.. |
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Re: Live Lady Alive
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 12:57:04 AM AEST
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Very good for 5 minutes...
Great diction and composition..
flow: gentle and telling-
Written with MUCH emotion-
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