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kiss wasted
Contributed by
hauntedangel
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Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 03:13:41 AM in AEST
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a kiss wasted, is a kiss gone
never agian will i see it
i miss the times i spent with a guy as sweet as a lolly pop
a kiss wasted, is a kiss far away
never agian to be felt in my arms agian
a kiss lost is a kiss gone
goodbye to my love
goodbye to my life
hello hell and every devil here
goodbye earth goodbye freedom
a kiss wanted is a kiss tempted
why cant i ever see you agian
love hurts and so do you
everything hurts when im here
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Re: kiss wasted
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by drtylilsecret on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:45:36 PM AEST
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| nice poem, shows your pain well. your writing has a lot of potential so keep going. |
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Re: kiss wasted
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by tears_of_blood on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 04:33:57 PM AEST
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| good write i like that words you used and how you put them in the poem really well done the pain that you had or have you could get from the words you had keep the poems coming. |
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