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The 'Morrow's Sonnet
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 01:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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Please chase these starting tears away
ebb mine to meet with springs-
tonight at least I've time to pray
for what the 'morrow brings.
Like sunset gleams that linger late
when all is darkening fast;
are hours like these we snatch from Fate...
the brightest and the last.
To gild our blackest days, if Heaven
should one bright hour allow;
so think that one bright hour is given,
in all it's splendor now.
Let's live it through a final night like waves that from the shore,
one minute swell, and are touched with light 'till lost for evermore.
Billy - 2006
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2006-03-08 01:12:12]
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Re: The 'Morrow's Sonnet
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 01:57:49 AM AEST
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| That is beautiful |
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Re: The 'Morrow's Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:44:19 PM AEST
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Aw, dear Billy, you've captured a most pleasing
sensation in this sonnet. I adore this.
And the author's note is wonderfully insightful.
Most impressed, am I at the discipline YOU have exercised.
This was [IS] so gently beautiful.
Oh my, yes, but I am completely in love with this style of write ...
[and the life you've given it!]
~Breezy |
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Re: The 'Morrow's Sonnet
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 08:43:35 PM AEST
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great post bro.
"To gild our blackest days"
i love that line..and the whole poem.
wiz |
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Re: The 'Morrow's Sonnet
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 09:55:06 PM AEST
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Oh Billy...this is so beautiful......magnificent would be a better word...
Well executed, my friend..
Jenni |
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Re: The 'Morrow's Sonnet
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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I cannot but echo all of the above.
Spledid Sonnet,! -
I love most of all the lines:
"Hopes never dies.. only dreams - so keep hope alive and all of your dreams will come true"
"To him belongs the world who can give Hope"
(Pierre Teilhard de Chardin S.J.)- my favorite writer.. Have a poem on the theme too.
A most exquisite Sonnet Billy
Blessinjgs
Elizabeth
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