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Longing for the past
Contributed by
LostInLife
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Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 10:36:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Alone in my dark room
Longing for the past
Except it has drifted away
X-mas was the worst with you
Memories they fade deep into my mind
Only your photo remains
Kindly you walk away
Remebering how I felt that day
Zapping our past thoughts to nothing
Yesterday we just moved on
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2006-03-07 22:36:41]
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Re: Longing for the past
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:19:38 PM AEST
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| wow very emotional; short and to the point. Sorry for your lost love, |
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Re: Longing for the past
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by diablohate on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 02:46:02 AM AEST
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| you focus too much on the light side of things......tell us how you really feel. treat your poetry with the feeling of the darker side of the truth.....and there you will find your true poetry. |
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