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No Good
Contributed by
MuCho_AmOr
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Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:33:56 PM in AEST
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There's no more good anymore,
The happiness drained,
And there's nothing left but pain.
Where there was once a heart,
A deep black void.
My sould has gone.
And no longer want to stay.
There is no point,
No way,
To bring the happiness back,
When there's simply no good anymore.
Copyright ©
MuCho_AmOr
... [
2006-03-07 16:33:56]
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Re: No Good
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:36:41 PM AEST
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well its a interesting write
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Re: No Good
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:04:18 PM AEST
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| I no how u feel....its a great poem! |
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Re: No Good
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:56:20 PM AEST
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| Hey, this is the style of poetry I like the most. It is very simple and to the point. You don't "beat around the bush" or hide behind ostentatious writing. You just lay it all out there. Good stuff. |
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