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False Bliss
Contributed by
Jaz
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Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It falls apart.
So unexplainably sad.
Conlvulsions of sorrow shake my heart.
Undeniably black.
It falls apart.
Why be sad? Things are better now.
Everything is fine.
Everything is fine?
It falls apart.
The fragile existence of my happiness.
My plea for rest
It falls apart.
Copyright ©
Jaz
... [
2003-01-29 19:40:00]
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Re: False Bliss
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by kegs04 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:43:25 PM AEST
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hey great poem loved it, keep up the great work! I can kinda relate to this poem also, but its all good..
~peace out mah brothah ;-) |
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Re: False Bliss
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 08:43:55 PM AEST
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Sad, but nice write...
Jenni |
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Re: False Bliss
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by hazelnut on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 08:53:40 PM AEST
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| tragic...sorrowful...i feel it. |
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Re: False Bliss
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by hazelnut on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 08:55:59 PM AEST
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| tragic...sorrowful...i feel it. |
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