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to all thats laid before me
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 03:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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in my solitay seclusion i wonder in midst of emptyness
a burden of my shallow soul i lay at the water bed
to genly lift and wash away the havoc i create
in the garden of my surrender i wander in the fake
watching little creatures scurry no violence that they partake
in the middle of this multitude a certain beauty takes shape
a chaotic rhythm in its form a vision with out mistake
all the creatures line up in this litle of a wake
and threw all thats laid before me this prattle of the blind
i escape with the vision thats burned across my mind
and i holler at the darkness it time for you to shed light
lets wake up all the passive lets breath a little fright
now watch and listen to the fathers
they died for us so our freedom will last
not that we can get drunk and forget our sorrow with a blast
so now a little lighter and feeling a little clean
i have spotted something Precious a little glitter in the air
i follow it in the shadow its weight so hard to bare
now running from the shadow it claws dig with out a care
i fall to the ground and look and weep
the problems are all to deep
i fall in the hurry my final step was to steep
so threw all that's laid before the shadows and the light
i will always love the surrender and follow from the night
with all that i love i will never give up the fight
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Re: to all thats laid before me
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by thesinner on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:57:02 PM AEST
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| great sentiment |
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Re: to all thats laid before me
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by Alison on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:07:37 PM AEST
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| wow i think its great! |
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Re: to all thats laid before me
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by MuCho_AmOr on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 06:15:33 PM AEST
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| Well let me just say that I absolutely loved every bit of it. |
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Re: to all thats laid before me
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:45:32 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: to all thats laid before me
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 05:01:29 AM AEST
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| i got lost in the magic of the language, well written |
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