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Blinded.....
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Blinded by all I see,
Blinded by what I feel,
Blinded by the beauty,
Blinded by whats real,
My eyes only see what they want,
Blinded by the rest,
Sometimes I feel they haunt,
I've been given tests,
I'm blinded by the love I get,
I need to open my eyes,
I tend to want to forget,
But than I realize,
Blinded by my life out there,
theres so much to see,
The beauty in life,I care,
My blindness gets out of me,
Than I'm blinded no more,
I see the passage way,
Go through that open door,
To see the light of day!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-01-29 19:20:00]
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Re: Blinded.....
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by kegs04 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 07:29:01 PM AEST
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great write i enjoyed it!
~peace out |
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Re: Blinded.....
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 09:05:28 PM AEST
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| Great write ....just popped in your head huh? I kill myself to get a line out and you write like this on the spur of the moment. lol go figure. Very well done christina! :o) |
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Re: Blinded.....
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by hazelnut on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 09:09:00 PM AEST
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Re: Blinded.....
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by venkat on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 06:28:42 AM AEST
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| Now I found rhythm and speed in your poem..A good write..venkat |
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