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The lines have been drawn
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 02:04:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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They grabbed me and pulled me back in
Even I know that I was falling away
I try to tell myself it was too soon
But I'll admit I don't know what's best for me
Knowing this much hurts
When you know you're at your worst
This hole feels like home
Especially when alone
With only yourself to blame
The lines have been drawn
And I've pushed them way too far
Crossed the first in innocence
But when you're 21 it doesn't make sense
Innocence is way past feeling
Take these chains
And break them in two
I'll take one half
If you'll take one too
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the_story_of_the_year
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Re: The lines have been drawn
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by twick on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 05:12:38 AM AEST
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| I really liked this because the specifics aren't concrete or at least not for me but the message still comes across. Misery loving company? Tell me if I'm way off base, I really want to know. But good job because you have me thinking what's behind the words. |
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Re: The lines have been drawn
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 05:54:39 AM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: The lines have been drawn
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by trini on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 08:49:27 AM AEST
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wow. thats all i can say. this was very well written i really enjoied reading it.
i hope to see more from you.
keep up the great work
-trini |
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Re: The lines have been drawn
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by Leslie on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 11:31:45 AM AEST
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| I really liked your poem a lot. It was short, concise and well written. And it made me think. |
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